Cinema Bizarre - Style is war!

THE UK FANISTE FOR THE NEW EURO-BAND SENSATION, CINEMA BIZARRE! COME AND JOIN IN THE FUN, AND SPREAD THE WORD! STYLE IS WAR M/
 
HomeHome  FAQFAQ  SearchSearch  RegisterRegister  MemberlistMemberlist  UsergroupsUsergroups  Log inLog in  

Share | 
 

 No Sleep!

View previous topic View next topic Go down 
Go to page : 1, 2, 3  Next
AuthorMessage
Oz
Super Mod
Super Mod
avatar

Number of posts : 1770
Age : 27
Location : Portsmouth, England
Registration date : 2007-12-01

PostSubject: No Sleep!   Sat Jan 12, 2008 4:58 pm

Title: No Sleep!
Author: Oz
Part: 1/1
Paring: Luminor & Shin
Rating: PG
Beta: Hughes
Disclaimer: I don't own Cinema Bizarre; the band or the music. I don't believe this ever took place anywhere excepting my twisted imagination.
Summary: Luminor remembers the past and a failed love affair.
Authorís Note: This is my FIRST ever Cinema Bizarre fanfiction. This is a one part episode unless you all think I should maybe write more than that!


The long dark haired boy, opened his pale blue eyes. Sleep, for him, did not come easy these days. Not ever since he had messed things up.

He sat up and rubbed his temple with his left hand. The clock on his bedside table read 4:26 am. He groaned loudly, knowing he probably wouldn't get back to sleep; he pulled himself out of bed.

As he straightened up, he caught sight of himself in the mirror. When had he started to look this old?

He found himself in his elegantly decorated living room. Taking a seat on his sofa, he lit himself a cigarette.

Whilst his eyes focussed on nothing in particular, his mind only focussed on one thing; the past. It was a strange, haunting thing, the past; taunting you with memories that you could never change -wish as you might- and leaving you with a sunken, hollow feeling.

Things had been very different when he had been with Shin. The younger boy had always been prepared to stay up and listen to anything troubling Luminor, with a keen and caring ear. He had also done his up most to fill the void in Luminor's heart and preoccupy his mind.

But in order for Shin to understand his friend's strange behaviour, Luminor would have to open up to the younger boy; something Luminor -because of his past- found most difficult.

Shin never liked taking 'no' as an answer. He often continued to question Luminor in an attempt to sympathise with his friend's pain.

But Luminor never seemed to answer enough. He often felt that his younger friend was being too intrusive. It left Shin feeling pushed away.

One night, the difference of opinion amongst the pair came to a head. It ended with a lot of hurt on both sides and with Shin leaving, shortly after announcing that things were over.

As big as the void Shin had filled with his presence, he left behind when he called things off.

Luminor picked up an old photograph of the pair. He took a long hard look at it; the happiest he'd ever been and the happiest he'd probably ever be. That struck Luminor as the funniest thing about the past; it filled you with so many regrets.

Luminor stubbed out his cigarette and wiped his eyes before slowly allowing them to close.


The End

_________________




My life may be weird and boring and stupid to some, but at least its mine--not some assembly line, secondhanded, hand-me-down life. - Jeffree Star

Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.myspace.com/oz_secret_mausoleum
Snowbear
Strify's Head Groupie
Strify's Head Groupie
avatar

Number of posts : 1775
Age : 27
Location : Wolverhampton, England
Registration date : 2007-12-22

PostSubject: Re: No Sleep!   Sun Jan 13, 2008 3:12 am

Awww, write more please!! Pleeeease? *puppy dog eyes*
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.myspace.com/bizarreuk
breakingvanity
Newbie
Newbie
avatar

Number of posts : 47
Age : 29
Location : Melbourne, Australia
Registration date : 2008-01-02

PostSubject: Re: No Sleep!   Mon Jan 14, 2008 2:15 pm

How sweet; in a terribly melancholic way.
I love the descriptive writing and please do continue.
I love you
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.myspace.com/poke_me
Oz
Super Mod
Super Mod
avatar

Number of posts : 1770
Age : 27
Location : Portsmouth, England
Registration date : 2007-12-01

PostSubject: Re: No Sleep!   Mon Jan 14, 2008 7:32 pm

Thanks girls *Hugs*
I think I'll write more from Shin's POV

_________________




My life may be weird and boring and stupid to some, but at least its mine--not some assembly line, secondhanded, hand-me-down life. - Jeffree Star

Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.myspace.com/oz_secret_mausoleum
Snowbear
Strify's Head Groupie
Strify's Head Groupie
avatar

Number of posts : 1775
Age : 27
Location : Wolverhampton, England
Registration date : 2007-12-22

PostSubject: Re: No Sleep!   Tue Jan 15, 2008 2:48 am

Yayyyy! *boogies* I can't wait!
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.myspace.com/bizarreuk
Oz
Super Mod
Super Mod
avatar

Number of posts : 1770
Age : 27
Location : Portsmouth, England
Registration date : 2007-12-01

PostSubject: Re: No Sleep!   Tue Jan 15, 2008 8:48 pm

I don't know when I'll finish but I've started Smile

_________________




My life may be weird and boring and stupid to some, but at least its mine--not some assembly line, secondhanded, hand-me-down life. - Jeffree Star

Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.myspace.com/oz_secret_mausoleum
Snowbear
Strify's Head Groupie
Strify's Head Groupie
avatar

Number of posts : 1775
Age : 27
Location : Wolverhampton, England
Registration date : 2007-12-22

PostSubject: Re: No Sleep!   Tue Jan 15, 2008 8:51 pm

That's the same with me, sometimes I just wanna finish a fanfiction but with all the thoughts I get I can't because I wanna put it all down and then it makes it an even longer fanfic.
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.myspace.com/bizarreuk
Oz
Super Mod
Super Mod
avatar

Number of posts : 1770
Age : 27
Location : Portsmouth, England
Registration date : 2007-12-01

PostSubject: Re: No Sleep!   Tue Jan 15, 2008 8:54 pm

lol! I end up somewhere I didnt expect and then I'm thinking "How do I end it now?"

_________________




My life may be weird and boring and stupid to some, but at least its mine--not some assembly line, secondhanded, hand-me-down life. - Jeffree Star

Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.myspace.com/oz_secret_mausoleum
Snowbear
Strify's Head Groupie
Strify's Head Groupie
avatar

Number of posts : 1775
Age : 27
Location : Wolverhampton, England
Registration date : 2007-12-22

PostSubject: Re: No Sleep!   Tue Jan 15, 2008 8:57 pm

So do I, because I'm a spontaneous writer.
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.myspace.com/bizarreuk
Oz
Super Mod
Super Mod
avatar

Number of posts : 1770
Age : 27
Location : Portsmouth, England
Registration date : 2007-12-01

PostSubject: Re: No Sleep!   Tue Jan 15, 2008 9:21 pm

I guess I am too scratch

_________________




My life may be weird and boring and stupid to some, but at least its mine--not some assembly line, secondhanded, hand-me-down life. - Jeffree Star

Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.myspace.com/oz_secret_mausoleum
Snowbear
Strify's Head Groupie
Strify's Head Groupie
avatar

Number of posts : 1775
Age : 27
Location : Wolverhampton, England
Registration date : 2007-12-22

PostSubject: Re: No Sleep!   Tue Jan 15, 2008 9:23 pm

Being spontaneous is great, because you read back and just laugh thinking 'What the hell was I thinking?'
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.myspace.com/bizarreuk
Oz
Super Mod
Super Mod
avatar

Number of posts : 1770
Age : 27
Location : Portsmouth, England
Registration date : 2007-12-01

PostSubject: Re: No Sleep!   Tue Jan 15, 2008 9:45 pm

I do...everytime I read my TH fanfic Gluttony and Sloth!

_________________




My life may be weird and boring and stupid to some, but at least its mine--not some assembly line, secondhanded, hand-me-down life. - Jeffree Star

Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.myspace.com/oz_secret_mausoleum
Snowbear
Strify's Head Groupie
Strify's Head Groupie
avatar

Number of posts : 1775
Age : 27
Location : Wolverhampton, England
Registration date : 2007-12-22

PostSubject: Re: No Sleep!   Tue Jan 15, 2008 10:30 pm

Really? Kewl. I think I'm like that with every fanfic of mine. Not to mention everything seems to happen at once. Smile
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.myspace.com/bizarreuk
Oz
Super Mod
Super Mod
avatar

Number of posts : 1770
Age : 27
Location : Portsmouth, England
Registration date : 2007-12-01

PostSubject: Re: No Sleep!   Tue Jan 15, 2008 10:48 pm

Yeah...and then you're like "what do I put here?"

_________________




My life may be weird and boring and stupid to some, but at least its mine--not some assembly line, secondhanded, hand-me-down life. - Jeffree Star

Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.myspace.com/oz_secret_mausoleum
Snowbear
Strify's Head Groupie
Strify's Head Groupie
avatar

Number of posts : 1775
Age : 27
Location : Wolverhampton, England
Registration date : 2007-12-22

PostSubject: Re: No Sleep!   Wed Jan 16, 2008 2:24 am

Yeah, totally! And you struggle to think of what happens next because everything you've planned has happened and because you can't think of anything else you tend to have to extend what you planned in later chapters. Smile
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.myspace.com/bizarreuk
breakingvanity
Newbie
Newbie
avatar

Number of posts : 47
Age : 29
Location : Melbourne, Australia
Registration date : 2008-01-02

PostSubject: Re: No Sleep!   Thu Jan 17, 2008 5:01 pm

*watches conversation like tennis match*
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.myspace.com/poke_me
Oz
Super Mod
Super Mod
avatar

Number of posts : 1770
Age : 27
Location : Portsmouth, England
Registration date : 2007-12-01

PostSubject: Re: No Sleep!   Thu Jan 17, 2008 8:27 pm

Yeah I'm absolutely terrible *sigh* this is why I get to a certain point and then I'm stuck...and assignments don't help!

@ Breakingvanity, sorry are we making your head spin? Btw, love the signature!

_________________




My life may be weird and boring and stupid to some, but at least its mine--not some assembly line, secondhanded, hand-me-down life. - Jeffree Star

Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.myspace.com/oz_secret_mausoleum
breakingvanity
Newbie
Newbie
avatar

Number of posts : 47
Age : 29
Location : Melbourne, Australia
Registration date : 2008-01-02

PostSubject: Re: No Sleep!   Fri Jan 18, 2008 2:13 pm

Yes, headspins are always fun ;P
Thank 'ee!
Sigs are always something to be stared at and appreciated for it's yumminess as so many other sigs in this forum have provided me with entertainment ;P
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.myspace.com/poke_me
Snowbear
Strify's Head Groupie
Strify's Head Groupie
avatar

Number of posts : 1775
Age : 27
Location : Wolverhampton, England
Registration date : 2007-12-22

PostSubject: Re: No Sleep!   Tue Jan 22, 2008 12:40 am

Like whose? scratch
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.myspace.com/bizarreuk
breakingvanity
Newbie
Newbie
avatar

Number of posts : 47
Age : 29
Location : Melbourne, Australia
Registration date : 2008-01-02

PostSubject: Re: No Sleep!   Tue Jan 22, 2008 12:24 pm

Oh...i wonder!
*stares at Strify's torso*
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.myspace.com/poke_me
Snowbear
Strify's Head Groupie
Strify's Head Groupie
avatar

Number of posts : 1775
Age : 27
Location : Wolverhampton, England
Registration date : 2007-12-22

PostSubject: Re: No Sleep!   Tue Jan 22, 2008 7:08 pm

Mine, you say? Yeah well Strify is hot so... hehe, just thought I'd flaunt it a lil bit...
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.myspace.com/bizarreuk
Oz
Super Mod
Super Mod
avatar

Number of posts : 1770
Age : 27
Location : Portsmouth, England
Registration date : 2007-12-01

PostSubject: Re: No Sleep!   Tue Jan 22, 2008 7:13 pm

There's so much to flaunt, why not?

No one liking the Shin sig, then?

_________________




My life may be weird and boring and stupid to some, but at least its mine--not some assembly line, secondhanded, hand-me-down life. - Jeffree Star

Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.myspace.com/oz_secret_mausoleum
Snowbear
Strify's Head Groupie
Strify's Head Groupie
avatar

Number of posts : 1775
Age : 27
Location : Wolverhampton, England
Registration date : 2007-12-22

PostSubject: Re: No Sleep!   Tue Jan 22, 2008 7:21 pm

Awww, is ickle Oz jealous? *pets Oz in attempt to comfort her* Yours is good too... Mine's just unmissable due to its size!
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.myspace.com/bizarreuk
Oz
Super Mod
Super Mod
avatar

Number of posts : 1770
Age : 27
Location : Portsmouth, England
Registration date : 2007-12-01

PostSubject: Re: No Sleep!   Tue Jan 22, 2008 8:00 pm

*Sulks* I want attention lol!

_________________




My life may be weird and boring and stupid to some, but at least its mine--not some assembly line, secondhanded, hand-me-down life. - Jeffree Star

Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.myspace.com/oz_secret_mausoleum
Snowbear
Strify's Head Groupie
Strify's Head Groupie
avatar

Number of posts : 1775
Age : 27
Location : Wolverhampton, England
Registration date : 2007-12-22

PostSubject: Re: No Sleep!   Tue Jan 22, 2008 9:32 pm

I know you do... *huggles Oz*
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.myspace.com/bizarreuk
Sponsored content




PostSubject: Re: No Sleep!   

Back to top Go down
 
No Sleep!
View previous topic View next topic Back to top 
Page 1 of 3Go to page : 1, 2, 3  Next
 Similar topics
-
» Articles / Press Releases
» What would you do in a blackout?
» Pet I own/owned...and pet i want

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Cinema Bizarre - Style is war! :: Fan-fiction :: Fan-fiction PG+-
Jump to: