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PostSubject: Gone Forever [One-shot deathfic]   Fri Feb 15, 2008 1:54 am

I know it's short but hey, it took up two sides of A4 when I was handwriting it! Here we go, my first attempt at a deathfic:

Gone Forever
Who wrote it?: Snowy
What's the genre?: One-shot death-fic.
What's the rating?: I'd say 15.
Any warnings?: YES! Don't try this at home, kiddies! Knife crime doesn't get you anywhere.
Time for the disclaimer: I do not own or know CB and they are all STILL ALIVE!! Thankies to Melissa for her two loverly Stryfiro fics beause I've made references to things that happen in one of them at least.

#All of my memories keep you near
In silent moments, imagining you here,
all of my memories keep you near,
In silent whispers, silent tears...#

He hadn't felt this way since the day they'd broken up all that time ago. he realised that this time, he wouldn't be coming back in two years. he was gone forever. he felt as though he had this huge gap that only his true love could fill. He just stood there and read what was in front of him over and over again:


"In Loving Memory Of
Karsten Müller aka Kiro
11th Jan 1988 - 14th Feb 2008"


The more he repeated this in his head, the more it hurt because it was slowly sinking in that his true love was never coming back.

~Flashback~
"OI! YOU! GREEBOS!"
"What's your problem?"
"You're my problem, you greebo f*g**t!"
before Kiro had a chance to make a witty comeback, the chav had stabbed him and left him for dead. Strify had called an ambulance but by the time they got Kiro to the hospital, they were too late.
"Strify, I'm so sorry..." Strify dropped down onto his knees and cried uncontrolably.
~End Flashback~

"I'll kill them for you, I promise." Strify thought out loud. He felt a hand on his shoulder. It was Luminor, who gave him a comforting hug and he couldn't hold back his tears, so he just broke down. Yu noticed the chavs that killed Kiro. He went up to them and said:
"This is for Kiro." he stabbed both of them and left them for dead.

The End.
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PostSubject: Re: Gone Forever [One-shot deathfic]   Sun Feb 17, 2008 2:02 pm

crying I hates the Chavs...Aww poor Strify!

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PostSubject: Re: Gone Forever [One-shot deathfic]   Tue Feb 19, 2008 7:46 pm

I hate chavs too. Hug for Strify!
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PostSubject: Re: Gone Forever [One-shot deathfic]   Mon Feb 25, 2008 8:55 pm

Aww bless his heart crying

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PostSubject: Re: Gone Forever [One-shot deathfic]   Sat Mar 01, 2008 5:58 am

I knowwww... Anyway, Yu did Strify's job for him innit? glomp for Yu.
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PostSubject: Re: Gone Forever [One-shot deathfic]   Mon Mar 03, 2008 9:22 pm

lol! You know that last sentance made no sense to me, but then I re-read it and I was like "Riiiight" But yeahs, Yu rawks fer sure!

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PostSubject: Re: Gone Forever [One-shot deathfic]   Sun Mar 09, 2008 8:32 pm

Yay for Yukitoooooo! lol!
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PostSubject: Re: Gone Forever [One-shot deathfic]   Mon Mar 10, 2008 9:32 pm

Fer sure lol! You've gotta love Yu

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PostSubject: Re: Gone Forever [One-shot deathfic]   Tue Mar 11, 2008 12:54 am

Of course! Wink lol!
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PostSubject: Re: Gone Forever [One-shot deathfic]   Tue Mar 11, 2008 9:35 pm

lol! And you've gotta save a hug for Strify, even if he is too grief stricken to ever love again!

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PostSubject: Re: Gone Forever [One-shot deathfic]   Tue Mar 25, 2008 2:41 pm

Yeah, poor thing. I can help him overcome the grief without taking complete advantage of him, I promise! Twisted Evil
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PostSubject: Re: Gone Forever [One-shot deathfic]   Tue Mar 25, 2008 8:30 pm

lol! Don't make promises that you can't keep...even I would totally take advantage.

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PostSubject: Re: Gone Forever [One-shot deathfic]   Tue Mar 25, 2008 9:52 pm

I'd only take advantage if he wanted me to and if he totally came on to me first, a'iiiiiight?! lol! Evne if he didn't, i think I probably would, just a little bit. I'd try damn hard not to but the temptation would just be too much, y'know?
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PostSubject: Re: Gone Forever [One-shot deathfic]   Wed Mar 26, 2008 10:04 pm

I can see why, cause he is just gorgeous after all Very Happy But if he was totally greif stricken I'd just have to do something to make the suffering stop! lol!

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PostSubject: Re: Gone Forever [One-shot deathfic]   Fri Apr 04, 2008 3:55 am

Yeah, like comfort him in that kind of not-quite-taking-advantage-but-romantic way. lol!
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PostSubject: Re: Gone Forever [One-shot deathfic]   Wed Apr 09, 2008 10:21 pm

lol! Or the absolutely-having-to-take-his-mind-off-things-kinda-way!

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PostSubject: Re: Gone Forever [One-shot deathfic]   Fri Apr 11, 2008 10:33 pm

Of course!! lol! Or both! Twisted Evil
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PostSubject: Re: Gone Forever [One-shot deathfic]   Tue May 20, 2008 3:27 pm

this was so sad! Crying or Very sad (but yet beautiful)
poor little strify..

you should write more one-shots! (or at least a story..=])
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PostSubject: Re: Gone Forever [One-shot deathfic]   Wed May 21, 2008 7:36 pm

Ooo that's something I can agree with totally, Harley quinn!

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PostSubject: Re: Gone Forever [One-shot deathfic]   Mon Jun 09, 2008 11:39 pm

Hey Harley, you should read ALL of my fanfictions on CBUKST. Every single one of them is there.
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